Tuesday, 21 May 2019

Evaluation

The idea for ‘The Boy in my Loft,’ was inspired by a story I read about a woman living under the floor in a man’s cupboard for 5 years. The woman in the story came out when the man left for work. She would steal food, because she was not able to fend for herself, so thought she could take advantage of the unsuspecting man. This piqued my imagination and inspired me to create a short film based around this idea. I was interested in placing this idea in the modern day to explore aspects the haves and the have nots in 21stcentury suburbia.

To represent the boy who is indeed living in the loft, it is important that first I represented the family living in the home. This is similar to the way that horror films present what is ‘normal’ by portraying normal family life and activities first which in turn allows audiences to understand what is therefore scary and abnormal. By portraying the family’s life as cosy and protectible it leads the audience in to a false sense of security. The family are relatively conventional, they have 2 cars on the drive of a suburban street, the property has a distinct family home look about it and in particular a realism that I wanted to get across from this area of mise-en-scene. Much like in Echo where family life is presented via the setting of a messy broken home for parts of the film. As I wanted audiences to see this family as normal, I dressed them accordingly in casual every day clothes and likewise added props such as a laptop, camcorders and a dog for this same reason giving a message to the audience that there is nothing abnormal happing within the house hold.  Again, a similarity in slap, where the clothes, settings and props used in the construction of mise-en-scene added realism to the piece and in turn audience engagement. This then was the ‘norm’ and when the living conditions of the boy in the loft are revealed, spectators can then see this representation as ‘other’. His character expression and movement are much more rushed, and wide eyed when he is able to sneak down in the moments, he believed nobody was home. I wanted to contrast the movement between the family and the young boy by making the movement very different. For example, while he is very nerves in his movement the family walk around the house with confidence. His nervousness comes from a fear of being discovered whilst the resident family have no such concerns. Now whilst the actual narrative can sound quite farcical, I wanted it to appear naturalistic, as if it could really happen. Similarly, to The Ellington Kidwhen the story is being told, and tight jeansin the way that the conversations and dialogue are delivered with such belief. The representation suggests a degree of persistence from the lead character as he is baffled to what is happening to the food and after challenging his parents sets out a trap and then cctv to catch the culprit. This touches briefly on family dynamics and relationships driving the narrative forward, similar to the untrustworthy relationship between the mother and dauter in Echo. I decided to go with a linear narrative, again like Echo, Slap and The Fly. This was because I was certain I wanted to make a short film in the silent film mould and of a comedy genreand therefore a non-linear narrativecould distract from that and certainly wasn’t the norm back in the 1920s. In conforming to this genre and also playing to comedy effect, I decided to use title cards rather than dialogue. I didn’t want the performance of the cast to distract from the story and believed that the comic effect and indeed help that the spectator gets from the title cards were far more effective too. They helped cement the three-act structure from beginning equilibrium, to the disruption; realising food was going missing and the subsequent attempts to discover by whom, and the ending when he reveals there is someone secretly living in the loft. Much like Arrivalhowever, I wanted to not tie up every loose end and question that audiences might have. Instead leaving it open for them to decide. As in Arrival, does she tell the man? Does she keep the baby? Do they stay together? With my film, audiencesare left asking who was he? Does the boy know him? Did anyone in the house know? How long had he been there? Why? And many more. By keeping it open I have also been inspired by the French New Wave film The 400
Blowswhere the still frame of Antoine's face leaves audiences wondering what is next for him once he reaches the seaside. I ended my film in a similar way to the 400 blows ending on a close up of the characters face. I chose to do this because I felt that it gave the audience a last chance to really empathise with the boy after seeing the conditions he had been living in and realising what he had had to go threw to survive.  One moment where I did debate whether or not to use flashbacks was early on when the lead character checks the receipt, as if to check he actually did buy the bread and didn’t actually forget. I did think about shooting a sequence of him at a shop buying it but kept the linear narrativeand used the receipt as a prop instead as I did not want to confuse the audience. When it comes to audiencetheory, I made a lot of micro element choices to create an engagement between the audience and the central character. I felt this is important as my target audience is young people age 15-25. This demographic use portable devices such as phones, tablets and laptops to consume short films on and sites such as Netflix for feature length films much more than cinema visits. Due to these streaming sites and YouTube being low cost or even free, their choice is wide and often within the first couple of minutes can become bored and switch over. I therefore cast a teenage lead, in a family, something audiences can relate to. He does day to day things like exercise and eating. The cinematography allowed shots of the home and close ups to show expression, 2 shots to show the conversations with parents, and use of the kuleshov effect to see the person and subsequently their POV. As mentioned earlier, the
linear narrative added a realism and I wanted to have a range of shot types in my cinematography. I liked the use of a shot from within the fridge especially and cutting to the footage from the video cameras set up to catch the culprit when the lead character is setting them up and checking they work. I particularly wanted to use an invisible cut in my film as I felt as though it helped drive the narrative without having to have      .                                                too many shots of the boy running down the street.  


In conclusion I feel that my short film ‘The boy in my loft, represents the social and education aspects of homelessness within the 21stcentury while keeping in the style of a silent film as well as sticking to my chose comedy genre. I feel my film reflects the style of Charlie Chaplin because not only did I Autor the film like Charlie Chaplin, the character of the boy in the loft echoes The Chaplin character not only in black and white and silent style of the film and also because the boy in the loft is down on his luck in the same way Chaplins. character frequently was. As well as this I feel like I have shown my ability to produce a film with a strong narrative and story line. I have proved that I can use a varied range of camera shots and angles, editing skills so that my film so it runs smoothly and the ability to shoot high quality footage.    

Thursday, 11 April 2019

Changing Ideas


I changed my short film idea because when it came to recording I struggled to get all my actors together at ones. This was a real issue as I could only film some shots without all my actors there. 

I decided to change mu idea from a short film about the impacts of thecnology to my short film witch is inspired by one of our case studies 'The Stories We Tell' 

Tuesday, 5 March 2019

Post 12 Rehearsal Footage

Rehearsal Footage

This is my rehearsal footage for my short film. I filmed this short clip in Thetford as it was very quite and peaceful there and there was enough variation on the footpaths for the walk not to be boring.




I think my rehearsal footage could have gone better if I had used a try pod. a lot of my shots were very shaky and bumpy while I was walking along which did not look very good. As well as that some of my shots were very over exposed due to the sun being behind my actors for a lot of the shots.

I think the invisible cut I used in my short clip worked affectively but if I was to do it again I would change the location, for example, I would start in the woods the use an invisible cut to cut to the street.







   

Wednesday, 30 January 2019

Post 11 Hunger Games



This is my response to the question 'how dose the director show emotion in the scene of rue's death' 

Friday, 9 November 2018

Post 10 Invisible Cuts In a Short Films

Invisible Cuts In a Short Films


Post 9 Camara Shots and Angles

Camara Shots and Angles 


These are a selection of camera angles. I plan to uses some of theres angles in my short film.

Post 8 Montage

My Montage 



This is my montage of someone revising for an hour but condensed to 1 minute 

Monday, 24 September 2018

Post 7 What's in the news?

Whats In The News

This is a story I found in the news at the moment. It is a bout a family deciding weather to bury there relativise in England or Nigeria as they were Nigerian born but lived in England for the most of there lives. 

I thing this would make a very interesting short film as you could start the film with the deceased as a child when they lived in Nigeria. Next you could almost change the mood of the short film and instead of filming a standard story you could film it as a montage showing all the important parts of there life as they grow up. For example you could show them traveling to England, struggling in an English school on there first day there or even them trying to get there first job. 

Sticking with the montage idea I believe that you could show the gurney the young Nigerian boy, or girl had to take to get to England and all the perils they ad to face long the way. Next you could cut to the family with the asses of the deceased and then show there gurney back tho Nigeria and reenforce how much easier it is to travel there now. Not only would they be traveling back to Nigeria they would also take the same roads, transport and way there deceased relative did.



With this story you could have a young girl who has set up her first social media account.

You could start the short film with the girl starting high school, meeting new people, making friends and exploring the school. In her first form time some of her new friends could be taking about instagram, facebook, snapchat and other social media apps. The young girl could be asked what her account is called and the explain to the other kids that her parents won't let her get an account. The kids could then start making fun of the girl.

In the next scene it could cut to the girl at home arguing with her mum about seeing up social a social media account saying that all her friends have one and she doesn't. The young girl could then storm off to her room. The camera could focus in on the young girl as she is debating to set up an instagram amount even though her parents have said no. Finally in this scene you see the girl set up her first instagram account and upload her first photo.

The next day.
At school the next day the girl walks in to school and people could be sniggering and laughing at her. Form time. Confused and upset the girl asks one of her new friends in form why people were looking at her and laughing. Her friend explains that she didn't put her account on private and some of the boys in the year above had got hold of her image and photo shopped it so she looked all crooked and deformed.

Finally at the very end it could cut to the girl crying on the way home and bursting in to her house and having to explain to her mum and dad what she did and what happened.



Saturday, 22 September 2018

Post 5 Why are there short films?

Why Are There Short Films?


With short films you dint have to keep your audience attention for as long as you do with regular 90 minute films, this is why I believe this is an appealing aspect for young directors. As well as not having to entertain people for as long with short films it is a lot easier to leave your audience with a message due to the length of the film. For example With the shorter films your key focus can be on leaving your audience with a message where as with the standard longer films you have to keep your audience engaged while trying to leave therm with a message. This message may get lost in the movie as some directors will add complex plots, explosions and love interests to keep there audience engaged. 

Friday, 21 September 2018

Post 4

Generating ideas' idea

We were given the task of choosing numbers witch determined the characters, setting, plot and genre of a short film and were told to create a short film of with what we were given. 



















Making My Idea


Scene One

In scene one you could start with the security guard starting his first day at work being warned about all the spooky and haunted objects and rooms in the castle he is about to look after. Being a cocky and ignorant man he didn't listen and began to look round the castle, going in every room and touching every artefact he could. 

Scene Two

In scene to the security guard will find a golden diamond encrusted plate with a skull on it. Attached to the plate it will say 'He who holds the plate will be cursed and will be turned in to a bird for the rest of there lives'. Being an ignorant man he picks up the plate, nothing happens, he then puts the plate down and walks of with a swagger about him as if he's proud that he picked the plate off.

Scene Three

Morining. The guard is awoken by a bang. worried that the castle is being broken in to he starts to tun down the long corridors of the castle. As he's running he notices that everything has got bigger in the castle and that the hall ways have got longer, confused he runs back to grab his flash light but the releases that it is almost the same size as him. Finally the security guard runs to the nearest reflective object to relieve that the curse was true and he had been turned in to a crow. 

Tuesday, 11 September 2018

Post 3.2

Genre

What is genre?

Genre is a style or category of movie for example there are many different types of genre in and around the film world for example: romance, comedy, horror, action and adventure and many more. 

Different genres apele to diferente tips of people so some movies contain more then one genre meaning there audience is a lot bigger. For example rom com is a romantic comedy. 

Monday, 10 September 2018

Post 3.1

Vladimir Propp 

Vladimir Propp was a Russian folklorist who is known for coming up the the identification of characters in movies. For example the hero the villain and the helper are the three main characters of all movies.  

The Hero 
The hero is often the protagonist or major character or characters that the audience associate most strongly with. As well as that the hero is also character the movie is build around. For example in the in the 007 series James Bond is the hero, this is because he is the character sent on quests and as well as that he is the character that is notorious for winning the girl. 

The Villain
The villain is the character who contrasts the hero, trying to stop them from completing there quest. In most movies the villain is morally bad mirroring the hero goodness of the hero. The villain is also there to torment and ruin the time of the hero in the movie. For example in Harry Potter the main villain is Lord Voldemort even tho he dose not fully aper till the forth movie. He is he main villain because he is trying to kill harry and stop him from for filling his goal. 

The Princess
The prinses is often the reward for the hero or may be wooed by the false hero. The princess may be seen very little in the movie perhaps only appearing at the end or they could be a integral character that accompanies the main character during the movie. The prises also dose not need to be a character it could be an object for example in the movie Kung-Fu Panda the princess is the ability of Kung-Fu and the abilities of the dragon warrior.  








Post 3

3 Act Structure 


What is a three act structure? 

A three act structure is where there are 3 main parts to the plot or stripped. Many conventional movies and screen plays now use this conventional method. 
Three Act Structure 

Three act structure is split in to 3 sections, the set up, the confrontation and finally the resolution. 

The Set Up 

The set up is probably the shortest act of the 3 act model. In the set up you meet the main characters in the movie as well as being introduced to what is going to happen in the movie. Most Act ones are made to grip the audience and keep them interested in the movie.

The confrontation

In the confrontation this is where the main action starts, for example in fast and furious 5 this is where the main characters make the first host and burn all the cash of the millionaire. As well as starting the main quest of the movie the confrontation is where romance may start to blossom between characters. 

The Resolution

The resolution is the last act of the three act structure. In this act all parts of the story are brought together and all unanswered questions are answered. Not only are all questions answered there is usually a drop, this drop may consist of couples having an argument, a kid napping or for example before the main robbery  in fast and furious 5 the main characters are caught by the police meaning they can't complete there final goal.  

Even though there are many films that stick to the 3 act structure middle there are films that don't. For example Un Chien Andalou has no set structure and jumps from scene to scene without any logical links between them.  

Tuesday, 4 September 2018

Post 1 Research into existing professionally made short films



The Most Beautiful Thing




1) I believe that this film is very creative because of the lack of speaking. Due to one off the main character being depth a lot of the feeling in this film comes from facial expression and movement from the actor's. As well as that I am a fan of the idea that the boy in the film is to nervous to write down his feeling and the girl can't express them because she is way to nervous to speak.

2) The setting in this short film is all centred around the bench that the two main characters meet at out side of school. There are scenes in witch you see both of them, in school, there bedroom, and in the street but the bench is the main setting in this movie. The bench is a very good setting as it is a quite peaceful place where both characters can express there affection for one another and grow there friendship.

3) The costumes for this film were very simplistic and plain. Because it was a American school that the film was based on there 'school uniform' is just plain cloths so the costume was very boring. I feel because the boy was a nerd he was not wearing any branded cloths and didn't really fit in to any fashion categories, where as the young girl wore quite fashionable cloths as well as a 'cool' rucksack. To reinforces the fact the boy is lonely and a nerd he was wearing glasses and had a laptop caring bag.

4) This films genre was definitely a love film. Both characters are outcasts and don't have many friends and struggle in social situations so it understandable that they would fall in love with each other. The other small genre in the film is jealousy, the boy got jealous when he saw someone els flirting with 'his girl' but did not trust her enough to listen to her side of the story.

5) The editing in this movie is very clean and slick and works very well.

6) This Short film uses  any camera shots and may different angles. For example it uses hots such as an over the shoulder shot, many different close ups, establishing shots and wide shots. The reason they might have used all these different types of shots is because seeing the character from a range of angles helps keep the viewer gripped on the scene. With a lot of the shots the camera is shaky and not fully forced on the character witch could of been avoid if they had used a tripod.

7) I really like the consept of this movie I believe that the idea is very unique and it is very well done.  I feel tho that there could have been more character development on both characters I feel that I didn't know enough about each of them to really feel much when they announce there love for one another.

8) There isn't much sound in this piece there is very little music added over the movie and if it is it is there just to fill gaps where there are silences. The music that was applied was applied very well, used   in the scenes where the main characters where communicating via not book.

9) Casting



I Miss You



1) This short film is very creative because there is no speaking between characters only the voice over form the man in the film. I am a fan of the idea that he is telling a story and the movie in the background reflects what he is saying. As well as that the idea that what he is saying is a spoken version of an email he is sending to his ex.

2) There are many different locations in this movie due to the fact it is based on a story that is being told. Some of the location are the party they met at, the movies, a lake and there are many different shots in and around the house of the main character. 

3) The costumes in this movie are very representative of the modern day person as it is set in the present. For example both male and female change outfits from scene to scene but both keep up with modern day factions and trends. 

4) This piece is definitely a love story showing us the beauty of relationships but also showing the hardship of a break up and the pain it can leave people in. I think this type of movie works with the genre because you don't need to hear the speaking to know that there in love you can see it from the movement and the facial expressions of the characters. 

5) Editing

6) The director used many different camera shot during this piece due to the fact of the setting consistently changing. For example during the oping scene there is a close up of the characters to sort of introduce them but as the movie continues there are wide shots, over the shoulder shots and '2 shots'.  

7) I really liked this movie due to the fact that is it short and snappy. For example there is no speaking potween each character only the voice over which cuts out a lot of un needed dialog. I don't really like the ending though I feel they director could have done more with it. 

8) During this movie there is no direct speaking potween characters only the voice over describing what is happening and telling us the story. While he is speaking there is music playing in the background but only very silently but it helps when there is breaks in the speaking.

9)

Evaluation

The idea for  ‘ The Boy in my Loft , ’  was inspired by a story I read about a woman living under the floor in a man’s cupboard for 5 years...